Welp I'm pretty much as addicted as you get to "I'll Form the Head"

So I came up with a concept for a could-be-would be verse that is basically about the 4th Space Rhino; Forest Green.

He forms the crotch...

I've got a chorus so far, but I wanna try and maybe make some sort of verse to go with it and record it, simply for the sake of making an idea happen. As it stands, I'm kind of pathetic at verse writing.

It's kinda cute how you all write me off as useless
Rhinoceros green literally integral fuse this
battle ready robot,
I'm a smaller part but so what

That's all I got. Down here is the chorus, I sort of really like it but I'm open to criticism.



Greens Chorus;

I just want some recognition
Cause when we're on a mission
I'm integral to dis-division
but ya'll form the head

Lifting up the torso
Is pretty hard and more-so
I ask to switch ya'll say no
So ya'll form the head


It's obvious we're ready
the middles sitting steady
this head is giving heavy
off with the head
off with the head
off with the head

So like hit me up with ideas or whatever to make this sort of...completed-ish? And If you're alright with me using your work in a (non-profit) recording that'd be super swell.

It's kinda cute how you all write me off as useless
Rhinoceros green literally integral fuse this
battle ready robot, I'm a smaller part but so what
We get in battle and I literally go nuts

I'd add more but that would be greedy